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Duncan

  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: In Search of Chimes

    Thank you for your review! :D

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: In Search of Chimes

    Your review meant so much to me. Thank you! :)

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: In Search of Chimes

    I am so glad that you liked the work! Thank you for reviewing! %uD83D%uDE0A%uD83C%uDF38

    Dec 24, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Culture Re: 48 Hours in Hong Kong

    I have nothing else to say. With your lively description and precise diction, you perfectly captured the tourist areas in Hong Kong. Believe me- I knew what I am saying, ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doubled Horror- Part 1

    Thank you for your review! I will get to correct these mistakes now. Again thanks for reading! :)

    Dec 1, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Doubled Horror- Part 1

    Thank you for all your reviews! I will try my best to fix all grammatical mistakes. Thank you guys!

    Oct 27, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: A short tale for Christmas (edited, yet not all mistakes corrected)

    Thank you for giving me ideas for improving this work! I wrote this last year as a school work, and I set the characters in senior primary school, like primary ...

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: A short tale for Christmas (edited, yet not all mistakes corrected)

    Thank you for your review!

    Sep 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Hell's Gatekeeper (Chapter 1)

    Sep 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: 5 Ways to get into the Literary Spotlight

    Being a piece of comedic work, I do believe, in my heart, that you have a great sense of humour. I enjoyed reading your jokes, and the first sentence 'This ...

    Sep 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Music of My Soul

    I think this is a piece of excellent work. You have made use of repetition successfully (My broken heart is blind). The feeling is indeed very strong they just float ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Music of My Soul

    Excellent- good use of repetition!

    Aug 22, 2014


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