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Re: Little Girl
It was a little long, but I don't see how you could make it any shorter and still get your point across. There were times I even thought you should ...
Jan 21, 2006 -
Re: Rebel Lady
I really loved your use of imagery. I could actually see the lady in my head as I was reading your poem. I also loved how you discribed her as ...
Jan 20, 2006 -
Re: Him
Him: The one I will never have Love is something I’ve dreamed of all my life When I was little, it was a tool I used to have fun It ...
Jan 20, 2006
