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Hey I am Erin, and well for starters, this is poetry and you really didn't put it in any poetry format. It made it very hard to review. In overall ...

Hey I'm Erin and I'll be reviewing your work tonight. I know what I did was unsuitable, but is love all that immoral? Is love—the definition being a profoundly tender, ...

Hey I'm Erin, and I'll review your work for you. First off welcome to YWS. I really like your imagery throughout your entire poem. I especially liked the strong statements ...

Hey it's Erin, and I loved this. Phenology isn't normally the subject I read but definitely you caught my attention well. You did an awesome job of describing without being ...

Hey this is Erin, and first off: I liked your honesty. I like how you didn't just give advice and left it open ended many people wouldn't take it serious ...

Hey I'm Erin and first of, very interesting start. Though I must say, it's really hard to comment on something so short. You had a few errors like: She called ...

Okay hey first, Loved the story line. It was completely original and while I was reading I could almost see a little child hearing that story before going to sleep. ...

Hey FazoliMoli, I really liked this poem, it was heart felt but not so dramatic. The only thing I can comment is how you only rhyme on occasions, or well ...

Hey I really liked this and actually really want to read more... All of this was my fault. How could I have let this happen! I shouldn't have been so ...

Hey there, Alrighty, this was hard to read all the way through because how long it was. I read it though because, trust me I know how it is when ...

Hi there! When I read this, I really liked it... Morning mom, morning dad." Lena said as she entered the kitchen on a murky Tuesday morning. An off the shoulder ...

Wow, I had a very clear picture of one lonely snowflake descending and landing with the rest of its snowflake friends. This poem since so short, is very welcoming to ...

I really liked this poem; I guess that's because how short it was. It was completely vague and left it on a loose end for interpretation. Also, I like how ...

I think this is an excellent start and the errors I saw were already touched by everyone else. I'd really like to have been able to read more, and you ...

Hey! I really actually like this poem, it wasn't one of those fake, "oh he loves me," or, "It was a stupid lie," it was really realistic. You know how ...