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Re: Trent Aether and the Secrets of Mount Olympus (Chapter 1)
this, i felt, was a great fanfic. however there a few grammar and spelling errors that you might want to check out. plus i would love it if you did ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: After Adonis Ch.3
pretty good
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: A Friendship Worth Saving
LOVE IT!!!!!
May 19, 2010 -
Re: That Awkward Moment
again i say perfect. ironic though that I never said perfect in the first place :smt003 ERANBEAR peace out type on!!!
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Anamalia chapter 1
ziggiefred please tell all of ur friends on YWS about this and love [edited]
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Love [edited]
sorry guys im new just got on yesterday and when i was editing i did something wrong and i had to start over
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (2) (edited)
ok so now that ive read it through its great. sorry i just read the sexual part and stopped because i found it offensive but its really great that emily ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (2) (edited)
whoa that's... :smt007 maybe a little to far but what can i say hypocrisy is not a mature thing for a critic
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (edited)
definately a work i progress
May 18, 2010 -
Re: Getting A Life
that was great!!!!!! one problem though, "which he did but didn't know how" (sorry if it's not exact words but u get the gist) you need to be more specific. ...
May 18, 2010 -
Re: love
i change tori to matt. Main Street to Central Park. And added some deets hope you like it :smt040
May 18, 2010 -
Re: love
thanks guys i really appreciate the feedback :smt003 I know I know its a work in progress
May 18, 2010