EbonyAutumn

Pieman is going to change a couple things in his post so it goes with my characters personality. She will pull her knife and only have flame in her hand ...

The sun’s rays melted onto the field, illuminating Coden’s young face. The young man danced around the field, swinging a sword overhead. It was such a wonderful day. He was ...

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Definitely re-read and revise. I saw a couple typos, words spelled funny and such. I didn't notice any run on sentences and your grammar was good. I really like the ...

Bio: Name: Autumn Leon Scaff Age: 26 Gender: Female Race: Fire Elemental Looking for: Revenge ^_^ Facial Features: Soft jaw line with nose and slightly plump lips to match. Incredibly ...

Name: Edward Cullen Age: 17 Race: Vampire Book or Movie: Twilight Appearance: White, tall, very defined muscles. about 6' 2" blond hair. Edward is about 5'8 if I remember correctly...should ...

May I add a character? Or are there too many at the moment? If you do allow me to join I don't plan on going into the tavern. Too many ...

I liked this piece a lot, but it was very emotionless, as a couple others have said. I know that you re-did a few things, but it still seems to ...

Very interested in reading more!

Hi! I'm June and I am new here. I actually created a new thread before I saw this one :D. Oops, maybe I shall look closer next time. Just got ...

I use 'til all the time. Like: 'Til next time. It just looks kinda dorky if it's: Till next time.

Hello. 0_o