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Re: Element- Chapter 1
The sun’s rays melted onto the field, illuminating Coden’s young face. The young man danced around the field, swinging a sword overhead. It was such a wonderful day. He was ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Angie -newly edited-
I liked this piece a lot, but it was very emotionless, as a couple others have said. I know that you re-did a few things, but it still seems to ...
Jun 29, 2008