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Re: The Black and White Rose
Thought it was great although I think it do with another verse
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: Three
Its good I like pace of the poem although like another user commented I would perhaps thinking about changing the ending as that could be improved. Good Job though
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: What Lies Within
The f word not really used as sarcastic. The reason I used it was to hopefully to try and shock the reader as the character is shocked and it can ...
Sep 17, 2011