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ElectricSkies

  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: The Demon Inside: Connor's Story

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I understand that the story feels a bit rushed--I wrote it in six hours and as I never thought I would ever be ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I was lost...

    I am so glad everything worked out! I'm really happy that you have a positive outlook about it!

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: The Demon Inside: Connor's Story

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: The Demon Inside: Connor's Story

    Thank you so much for your feedback! I will definitely keep your tips in mind for future writings!

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Teen Fiction Re: Angel Wings

    I really like your poem! I did get a sense of imagery while I read it and that is always a good sign. I did appreciate how you made the ...

    Nov 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: On This Day

    I like this a lot! I love the simplicity yet strength that you conveyed. Keep up the good work!

    Nov 26, 2013


“Rise like Lions after slumber In unvanquishable number. Shake your chains to earth like dew Which in sleep had fallen on you— Ye are many—they are few.”
— Mary Shelly