Elfboy

Thanks for the reveiw! The 'who' in the poem is the dream itself; It's being addressed as a person who chooses to be fulfilled in the speaker's writing.

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Actually, the Haiku is a very brief medium and intentionally so, and is almost universally used to describe some aspect of nature. Birch Tree is a prime example of a ...

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Hey, thanks for the reveiw! I'll think about your suggestions, but I think I'll wait to change anything until I hear back from Silver Blade magazine before changing anything, so ...

Thank you so much for the review, and I'll work on the description. Have a good day!

Hey, thanks for the review! Originally, Gerrard gets a bit too greedy in his dealings with the witch, whom kills him. I had this in until I was about to ...

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Thank you so much!

Thank you! Haiku is one of my favorite poetic styles. I don't know if a double haiku is a thing, but hey, why not? Poetry is about creativity!

Thank you for bringing those points up! I appreciate any feedback, especially of whatb I can fix. I also thank you for your politeness in The feedback, keeping a positive ...