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Re: Undergrowth brushed by snow.
Hello there! These are some nice pictures, and they definitely embrace the spirit of winter. I'm jealous that you were able to take such nice shots; I've tried a few ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Into the Depths. 3 *Edited*
This has been edited with suggestions taken into account. :)
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Warm Dough
Hi, Chal! So, this was a nice read. You seem too have planned this out and know your characters well. I like the simplicity of this -- like StoryWeaver said, ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Intentions
Hi, Persephoneia! Thanks for requesting this -- I had a real pleasure reading through it. I don't have much to say so this critique is going to be brief. Your ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: The Idol
Hi Glitter! So, this was an interesting story that has a nice concept to it, and it was very heartwarming to read about, even if it is a fiction. However, ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
Done, guys! Who's next?
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Disenchanting
Magnus! :D It's been too long. You should definitely spend more time on the site, okay? Thanks so much for requesting this -- I had great fun reading it. You ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: How do I find chat?
Scroll down to under the featured works and the leader boards/recommended works, and you'll see two links: Enter Chatroom and Read the FAQ. Click on the former to enter chat! ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Did I Drown
Hi, Dots! So, this was a fun read. Is this for school or some sort of contest? Whichever it is, all of the requirements seem to make the writing of ...
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: Earl Grey
Hi, Lumi! So, you've gotten a lot of feedback on this so far so I'm going to be brief -- I just thought I would stop by and give my ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Chase
Hi there! So I thought that this was a neat little story, and it gave us a fresh perspective on the classic prey-and-predator chase scenes. From the beginning of the ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Whispering
Hello! So, this an interesting piece. You have a nice writing style. It definitely seems like you exerted a lot of time and energy in to writing this story. However, ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Did Someone Call for a Reviewer? (Closed)
All done!
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Hate the Lovely
Hey, Jas. :) You've gotten some good advice so far so I'm going to be brief. I like your concept here. It's interesting and creative, and I like how you ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Shower Poetry
Hi Lily, how are you? I very much like the thought and composition of this poem. It feels very carefully plotted out and structured; I can tell that you cared ...
Feb 2, 2011