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Hi Luke! I'm Ellie, and I'm here to give you a review. As a heads up, I have not read Lord of the Flies, and I'm not that familiar with ...

Hi Misery! Welcome to YWS! I'm Ellie and I'm here to review. I really like the idea behind this. Even thought you say in the poem that it isn't a ...

Hi Helena, Ellie here to give you a review. I think this story has a lot of potential. I particularly enjoyed the first paragraph and how you brought us into ...

Hi AutoPilot, Ellie here to give you a review! I quite enjoyed this poem. I thought it was very descriptive and portrayed the central emotion very powerfully. Yet it was ...

Hey there Ella! Ellie here to give you a review. This is definitely a really interesting premise for a story, and it really reminded me of this episode of The ...

Hey Eros! Ellie here to give you a quick review. I really like the idea behind this poem. To me, it represents the importance of living in the moment and ...

Hey Brainwasher! Ellie here to give you a review. I really like this article. It's definitely very thought provoking and well written. I haven't watched Elon Musk's Ted Talk, but ...

Hey Marms! Definitely an eventful chapter. I really like where the story is going! I was curious while reading this how old Margo and Juno are supposed to be. When ...

Hey, Marms! Ellie here to give you a review. Overall, this is a solid chapter. I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so I'm just going to try to ...

Hi, Cub! Ellie here to give you a review. Firstly, I want to say your avatar is adorable. Good for you, entering the Scholastic Art and Writing Contest! It's ton ...

Hey again Pap! Ellie here to take a look at the second part of this. The plot thickens! It's well-written like the last. You have a really strong set-up here. ...

Hey! Ellie here to give you a review. So far, I think you have a really intriguing set-up for a story here. Since this is in Novel/Chapter, I'm assuming that ...

Hi Pap! Ellie here to give you a review. As a quick note, I haven't read any of your chapters, so I'm going to base my critique entirely on how ...

Hey Demon! Ellie here to give you a review. I noticed this was in fanfiction. Are these already existing characters, or did you make them up? I was a little ...

Hey there Holiday! Ellie here to give you a review. I wanted to mention that I noticed this was posted almost a month ago and I'm the first person to ...