Elinor

Hi Thundah! Ellie here to give you a review. Just as a heads up, I haven't read any of the other chapters, so I'm looking at this as its own ...

Hey, Jims! Ellie here to give you a review. First and foremost, a couple of questions. I'm a big fan of all of the Star Wars movies, but I don't ...

Hey, Lelu! Ellie, back again for the third part of this review. Well, I'm excited for you to post more! One thing I liked about this chapter was the references ...

Hey Lelu! Back again to give you another review. I like where this is going. I like how you bring in the parents, since their absence is never really explained ...

Hey there, Lelu! Ellie here to give you a review. I'm a big fan of The Little Mermaid, both the Disney movie and the original story, so I was really ...

Hey Vent! Ellie here to give you a review. As a fair warning, I haven't read any of your other chapters, so I'm a bit unsure of the story up ...

Hi Aly! Ellie here to give you a review. I brushed up on the first part of this and am now here to take a look at the second part. ...

Hi there outvaders! Ellie here to give you a review. This is certainly a very interesting and timely piece. I'm curious if you did this on your own or for ...

Hey there Ishan! Ellie here to give you a review. I think you have a really good start to something here! I was certainly invested while I was reading it ...

Hi Ark! Ellie here to give you a review. Just a quick comment before the review proper. Phoniex should be spelled Phoenix. Easy fix! I'm a big Harry Potter fan, ...

Hi Tea! Ellie here to give you a review. Well, this is an interesting premise for a novel, and I'm certainly intrigued to see where it goes from here. I ...

Hi there Ekk! Ellie here to give you a review. I quite liked this. I liked the mood you conveyed here, the idea of yearning for youth and lost love ...

Hi Legacy! I quite like this. I can't imagine how hard it must be to worry about whether or not your family will accept you for who you are. This ...

Bonjour! I quite enjoyed your poem. My French is a little rusty, so it's hard for me to critique this on a real technical level, but I liked the feeling ...

Hi Mavery, The plot thickens! Please let me now when you post future parts to this, and I promise it won't take me as long as it did the first ...