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Hi Demitri! Welcome to YWS. Here is my review, as requested. I feel bad about this one because there isn't really anything I disliked about these collection of stories. You've ...

Hi bmat! I really liked this. It was a short poem with a meaningful tone and message to it. However, you weren't very strong in area of actually writing it. ...

Is this a villanelle? It's very, very well done, considering that these poems can be some of the hardest to write. You pulled it off rather nicely; the tone and ...

Hello there! I just would like to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. It was a nice idea, the writing is fresh and clean. However, there were a few ...

Haha, awesome Snoink. This is a haiku, yes? I thought it was pretty awesome, and I laughed a little at the end. My only problem is that the lines seem ...

Hi! Sorry it took so long for me to get back to you on this, but school bites, ya know? Anyway, to the review. This was just okay. I liked ...

Hello, Firearris. his is an interesting poem, and I'm trying to decide how I feel about it. I really want to like it, but something just falls flat. I don't ...

Wow, Karina. I read the whole thing-it was amazing. Seriously, please try to find a publisher for this. I could see potential of it doing very, very well. I remember ...

Hi Sarah! I really liked this poem and I only had a few minor things that I wanted to nitpick this. I am playing a game that you made for ...

Full of your usual brillance, Mr. Kylan. You had some great imagery, and this poem followed and very interesting and cohesive plot. Where did you get the idea, may I ...

Hi! I liked this! However, I do have a few tiny problems with it. Please refer to comments, and the corrections I have made in green. Who is my soulmate ...

Hey there! Here is your requested review! This was a pretty good piece. I didn't have many problems at all with this poem. You had fantastic imagery and good description ...

Hi TripleTravelTales. I'd love to review this, but it's way, way too long me. I did a quick word count check, and this is 5,452 words, which translates out to ...

Hi Fofxire. How are you? This story has a lot of potential, and I was interested when I began reading. However, your execution was not the best. What do I ...

Hi Kanen. I read through the first one to review when I realized that you rewrote this. I figured it would be a bit more helpful if I reviewed this ...