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Re: Carradyne
Repusto had been trained in th Dark arts. there was only one other person who knew everything that Repusto knew, the master. Empress Eriera. She was a terrible foe of ...
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Re: Your Smile
Augh, no offense but if you rhyme once you should rhyme the entire poem, not cutting the rhyme off ever now and then. THAT'S WRONG! The first 8 lines seemed ...
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Re: Carradyne
The funearl proceeded as planned. Reconstruction of the city would commence the next day. "I remember the time of innocence, when King Soriah Ganan ruled among us with loving hand. ...
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Re: Fire Insurance(I swear this is true)
OH MY GOD! Although this furthers my belief that Americans are stupid.
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Re: The Worlds Ugliest Dog
WHAT WOULD THIS WORLD BE NOW? NO SAM? NO UGLIEST DOG? We must find a replacement Sam.... Also, if you wish, visit: WE MISS YOU SAM!
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Re: What you would love to say to reviewers but can't...
F*CK YOU AND YOUR TASTE!!! You're society's troublesome ass and you don't deserve to be able to say what's good or not! *Harsh, harsh I know, yet, oooh sooo funnn!*
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Re: Carradyne
'It shall be done.... as for the survivors... come, be knighted in the great hall. And let us fix up the ruins of Carradyne. Soon, again, other cities will know ...
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Re: Take me
It reminded me of that song that's like FLY LIKE AN EAGLE SO MY SPIRIT CAN BE FREE I liked it... nice flow... although I wouldn't capitalize Take before that ...
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Re: Suicidal Mind
You shouldn't rush a story... That's like a totally bad thing to do unless it's due in 30 seconds... "Still after three tears the teachers were careful around her." Metophor ...
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Re: Carradyne
(Isn't this.... the end?) (Or is it...)
Dec 2, 2005 -
Re: Carradyne
"the spell i cast was a bluff. it would destroy him but I was perfectly safe the whole time... it made me dead for a while... so we better hurry ...
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Re: My own rainbow
You know, why bother posting this if you won't let people bloody say things about it? I mean the whole point of critique if there isn't anything bad to be ...
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Re: On the Eve of my Sixteenth Birthday: Ode to Winter
Happy Birthday Brad! I liked this, it was honestly a very beautiful piece. You never sieze to amaze me.
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Re: The Worlds Ugliest Dog
SANTA BARBARA, Calif. -- A celebrity pooch named Sam has died. With a hairless body, crooked teeth and a tiny tuft of hair on his knobby head, Sam was billed ...
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Re: Writing Challenge 11/28 Fly Day
I'm sorry I shouted, it was a bad day... but yeah... I shoulda called them earth boots but... lol... she was still floating.
Dec 2, 2005
