EllaWrites14

Thanks a bunch!

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Thanks for making me your first review! I know it's short but it's just a first draft and I'm using all of these reviews to help me develop my chapter. ...

This is a great poem! I like the passion and emotion. It is quite short though. It could possibly be longer. Also, the structure is a bit finicky. It might ...

Interesting concept. What if someone won't accept Jesus into their life? Are they alone then? What if somebody does not believe in Jesus? Does their faith figure prevent loneliness? So ...

Thank you for the advice! It will be taken in its entirety. And you can call me Ella haha. First of all, before I go on to address your amazing ...

Thank you for the advice! It will be taken in its entirety. I will be developing Tracy as an interesting side character with a potential plot path using yours and ...

Thank you very much for your advice! I am doing a first draft of my book so the chapters will be longer and all advice will be taken with gratefulness. ...

Good starter, needs developing.

Awesome poem!