Ember

Wow, aeroman! I can't thank you enough! You really did more than I was expecting! XD Things to clear up: The -kun thing is an honorific in the Japanese language. ...

This was a great piece in my opinion, because it wasn't the generic 'happily ever after' romance novel. I really liked the way you put Rachel as a symbol for ...

Thanks so much, XxxDo! I'll get on those right away! However, as for the -kun thing, in all of the manga that I've read, you don't capitalize honorifics in Japanese. ...

Oh wow. XD I didn't even notice that bit about 'taking the position of a father'. I'll erase that. As for the past tense thing, I'll make it prominent in ...

Rosey, Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it! Things to clear up: When I was describing Nakayama Rai, I actually did give the meaning of his name, ...

Wow, Rosey! I liked how you excellently tied in the elements of Celtic folklore and the day-to-day life of a college student. I thought it was a well done piece ...

Evi, This was an amazing piece of writing... no joke! You used a perfect combination of the senses and Alex's emotions to really put the conflict out there- that he ...

I just clicked the star button! Well done! I really liked the way your character went through a very dramatic series of changes in just a short amount of time. ...

Please review my historical fiction story if you have free time!

Penguin, I really liked the way you put forth the dialogue. You could clearly see the personalities of the two characters less than halfway into the story. I don't know ...

I thought that this was a very interesting and great piece for two reasons. One, because I've never heard of anything like this before. I would have never thought of ...

I I'd once thought that since I was the son of a samurai that I would automatically follow in my father's footsteps. I'd once believed, just like a child believes ...

[GO HERE FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER! --> [CENTER]2 Weak[/CENTER] “Do you want your medication now?” Llewellyn asked gingerly. I nodded without words, Llewellyn’s suspicious eyes flickering toward my

Wow, thank you so much for this! I really appreciate your constructive criticism and I will get right to editing. Thanks again! -Ember

I thought this was an excellent take on a higher power- this poem definitely got into God's head. I especially liked this part of the poem: [QUOTE]I created Earth in ...