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EmeraldEyes

  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Silverfish

    Heeeeey. I will say from the start that silverfish are a menace XD Silverfish are to books as moths are to clothes. I live off paper, I eat holes into ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Sovereign

    Hi. I thought you said you were going to write happier works from now on. :p I don't necessarily think this is happy. :( These dry bones have worn away, ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 6: Alive & Kicking

    Hello. So I've spoken to you about this work and I have been dipping in and out of it. I believe it should be out of the green room right ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bullets

    Addressing an issue as deep as this here makes you quite a profound person. But I found when reading this, that you didn't really say anything new on the subject. ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Pabo's Planets

    Hello. Well I agree with your point at the beginning of this being very whimsical, which is a good adjective for it, but at the same time, it is also ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: We the People by ScarletDreams14

    Hi. So I think this is a very philosophical piece, and obviously it won't apply to everyone, but you've done a very good job of promoting the human race in ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Unwanted Plotline

    Hi So I would mark this solely as a piece of descriptive writing, you can tell that, just as when you start reading, because it launches straight into it: The ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Love of a Sociopath ~ Ch. 5

    Hello. I have to say this is one of the best works I have read in a very long time, because this is so gripping. The title pulled me in, ...

    Jul 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Journals of a Greek Demigod, Part 1

    Hi. So when I saw the title of this I was beginning to think I was gonna see like a Percy Jackson tribute XD And I wasn't wrong! :D So ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Once upon a time we both did not know how to spin.

    Hello. This was a very bitter work, or so I got, especially from the last line. Simultaneously, I really enjoyed it! XD Not only did you tell a story with ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hi. I understand the meaning behind the opening lines, but I don't think it is written in the most accurate way: Dafyr heard her footsteps before he saw her. A ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Traitor

    Hi. So I found the chapter title of this one a little bit cheesy, 666. Hee hee. Devil and all that. XD A heroes death is always beautiful. When it ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Going through Time-Chapter Seven: We're Dying in Two Ways

    Hey! Your opening sentence made me laugh, because it was so blunt: I was frozen. My plan was to saunter in, ask Hades where Tartarus was, and find Cronus and ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: True Happiness

    Hello. So I noticed that this was very well written, however I find myself inclined to disagree with the major point of the work, which is revealed in the end ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: "Queen Elsa's anger issues" with Olaf.

    Hey! XD I haven't seen the movie yet! So this was full of nice little spoilers (I like spoilers) :D I like the way you've written this in a rather ...

    Jul 24, 2014


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