Emerson

The weird spaces between your lines make this annoying to read, but I'm sure it is just a formatting error. ^_^ She was going to seat [s]her self[/s] herself on ...

But what about in the Advanced Critiques? Actually, since I last roamed the AC area, we don't in receive review counts for posting there? I don't know though, it may ...

:D This makes me a very happy camper.

O! this poem is too long. And it desperately needs punctuation. At the age of thirteen, I had never read much poetry. I'm assuming you, too, have not read much ...

Welcome to the site! If you have any questions or need help finding something, feel free to pm me. ^^ What kinds of things do you write? Read? Love the ...

I'm glad I'm not the only one who finds these creepy. Please do not bring them back? :lol:

42. Hahha, No, in all seriousness. I was surprised someone hadn't said that before. I'm a bit of an "all of the above". Life is to live, to find knowledge, ...

Trying to ignore those arguments previously mentioned, Colly is right. Some of these lines are fantastic. I for one am I strong believe in punctuation making a poem stronger, because ...

Your punctuation is a bit chaotic in places. For example: Repeatedly bitten, by a thousand Gleaming star-strewn eyes. And yet the sting dulls into Oblivion, amnesia’s innocent surprise. This could ...

Hello Darling! The bluish light shines through the liquid in the bag, making me nearly sick as I watch the swirling [s]particals[/s] particles of who-knows-what inside it. I think saying ...

I like it but I think it lacks a much needed flow. Each stanza seems to stand so strongly on its own that they don't stand too well together, or ...

Well there you go! ^_^ Thanks, Nate. My brain has been a bit lost among scholarship essays and state testing, haha.

I believe the due date for all articles was something like the 5th of May but I don't entirely know if this issue will make it...

Oh, I love you terribly! I do want specific comments. I fear I fail at poetry entirely, and people may be lying to me about my qualities. How is my ...

I have only received a handful of articles for this months squills. Please, if you would like to see another issue come out, then write for it. Squills is not ...