EmilieHaugaard

Okay, now I've changed it a bit :)

Thank you for the review :) I will try improving the flow. What are the grammar mistakes? English is not my first language, I would really like to know if ...

Thank you so much!:) Yes, it thought about how a big deal of life is love, and we choose who we care for, but it is also at the expense ...

Thank you!:)

Thank you so much for your critique! :) I corrected my typo, and I will try to think of what I can do to develop the poem:) If you have ...