EmilyofREL

Thank you!

Okay, so I've already read this. And I read it again...and I cried, again. This is awesome dude. Keep it up!

Write it. now. Please. I'll be reading. and yes!! Christian Writer's rock (which reminds me...I need to change my avi!) :D

HI! I'm not gonna review this cause I did that already. Just wanted to let you know again how awesome this is and how awesome you are! Miss you, and ...

This is BEAUTIFUL! Seriously...I'm sorry for what you went through (hugs) But the positive thing is pain can release as incredible writings like this one.

Emotional...wow, incredibly emotional. Beautiful written. Great job!

Everything else has been said, but I just have to say that a love it. Great rhythm and flow. Hilarious! :)

I didn't stop smiling the whole time. This is awesome!

I agree with the previous post. Another idea is to break it up into stanzas. It looks like a good piece, but the big blocks of text are difficult to ...

That's true, and I should probably break this chapter up. But the thing is she didn't miss just ONE started with one and kept going. At first it was out ...

This is hilarious!! Great lighthearted poem to read. The nitpicks have been pointed out, I just wanted to say I enjoyed it! Would you mind checking my stuff out if ...

Wow! I love stories that can take me from grinning like a fool to having tears in my eyes within the span of a few paragraphs. This was pretty good. ...

Awesome. Funny and creative. This was great to read for the Romeo and Juliet portion of my English final. lol jk. I hope you got an A, because this is ...

I definitely understand what you mean about establishing setting, in this chapter in particular. I can see why you were confused. I'll fix that. I get the back story. It ...

Okay. thanks. This is a chapter that I've thought has needed editing/adding. the next chapter is better. Could you suggest how I could add depth? Ryan gets better as this ...