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Re: Rachel: Hiding
Hmmmmm, no! :D I have something really good, if I have enough comments on it. I really need people to tell me the truth so I will KNOW what to ...
Mar 14, 2005 -
Re: Lockdown, Chapter One
lol see what I mean?! :P Im kidding btw
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: Lockdown, Chapter One
Okay Hunter..... Its a good story, you have talent. At least you didn't ruin it with your 'funny' humor. Good work!
Mar 13, 2005 -
Re: Hourglass- no prior reading required :)
It is really good, there is alot of description, keep it up!
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: Hourglass (pretty short)
Its good so far, man you have a better use of words than me! And your younger! I really need to start learning in English....
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: War (I wrote this when I was younger and stupid)
Its good, but short, I would of loved to hear more of it, keep it up! PLEASE! Oh, and tell us what happens next!
Mar 12, 2005 -
Re: the On the Spot Fiction!
erh... wow! I'd like to read more of this!
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: All for the Good of Friendshipe, Poetry and Pie SCENCE 1
Yer! Meanie! *cries more* you made a girl cry! O.O
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: All for the Good of Friendshipe, Poetry and Pie SCENCE 1
Its your fault TBR that my scary mary story got deleted and it wont come back! *cries*
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: Smoke and dust 4 - Combat & Stealth
Its great, sorry I took my time to comment. It just gets better and better!
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: hurt
Aaaaah I get it now! :wink:
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: All for the Good of Friendshipe, Poetry and Pie SCENCE 1
Good but one thing.... YOU ALREADY SENT IT, DELETE IT NOW! A WASTE OF SPACE IF IT IS ALREADY UP THERE. Sorry, but I dont like it when they take ...
Mar 11, 2005 -
Re: hurt
It was freaky and confusing, but the descprition kept me there. Good job.
Mar 10, 2005 -
Re: Darren Shan Saga
Wow, well people have thier own styles of writing and reading. Anyway I didn't find it boring and got alot of people into it, maybe you weren't that kind of ...
Mar 6, 2005 -
Re: Granted Wishes
Well... I thought it was very good. As I am rubbish with spelling I asked Harley to help me, so if you see any large words, Harley slidded them in! ...
Mar 6, 2005