EmmaeArkay

Nice finale, liked it as always. :D Isn't really that much I can complain about aside from my usual pedantic comments. E.g: each clash an explosion happened 'Happened' is a ...

Nice. :D Well, eventually. I've always hated poetry, but that's just because it never fails to make me feel stupid, until I looked at the spoiler thing in your message ...

*Remembers to follow* There, now it should remind me when new parts come out... I think. :| Okay, I'll get the critical stuff out the way. At a bend in ...

Ooo, the plot thickens. I liked this chapter, much more than the first. Evidence of that would be that when I got to the song I added a tune to ...

Heh, reading this was nostalgic. Annoyingly enough, everyone I ignored at that age turned out to be right, it is just a phase. I actually quite liked this, it's a ...

Hot damn! The imagery! The metaphor! The pathetic fallacy! To simplify, that was one hell of an excerpt. Not really all that much I can criticize, thankfully. There were certain ...

Alright, this is my first attempt at an analysis, so it's up to you if you want to take what I have to say seriously or not. To start with, ...