Emmy

Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you
It's certainly interesting, that's for sure! 6.5/10 because it's a little clunky and confusing. It should probably be seperated into two sentences. Here's mine: Ten minutes before she disappeared, Cas
Jul 11, 2010

Steps to enlightenment brighten the way, but the steps are steep. Take them one at a time.
— Cheshire Cat (American McGee's Alice)