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I'm caught up for now! Welp, I don't really have anything to critique this chapter. Shame on me, I know. This is the problem with not coming immediately- I can't ...

Holy moly, there are three reviews already. I SURE AM BEHIND “But I'm trying to make it up to you!” Kamikaz's eyes suddenly widened. She approached Mettrick and put her ...

Guess who's caught up? Me! ... For another day, anyways, until you upload this week's. I like this chapter! The way the beginning(?) of the chapter is written, with all ...

le gasp. I'm first? Tyler's proclaimed exhaustion/annoyance confuse me. In general, no one reacted negatively to the scenarios in the last chapter; in fact, I believe that most of them ...

This chapter feels like a missed opportunity for comedy, possible in multiple ways: The 'battlers' take it very seriously (shown through little actions after dialogue), making the great contrast betwe

I bump Buggie's first general comment. Kudos on those flow charts! They're nice to look at and present information in a way that would be much harder in words. Since ...

Yoo-hoo, Ender here. This chapter feels a bit rushed... but Darren had never considered getting revenge on it for that one day in his earlier youth. It turned out to ...

Well, I am here! :D I'll finish this and leave the rest of your chapters to review day. I'm so sad that I'm pointing out typos, but I really don't ...

Oh ho ho ho ho ho I've said this already and for the sake of not comprising all of my reviews of a single complaint, I'll just remind you to ...

Ahem... Here are some unorganized paragraphs to formulate my review. Let's hope I can make the most out of Thanksgiving Break (a.k.a not play games and read fan fiction all ...

I still have no idea how to format my reviews, so bear with these unorganized paragraphs. Drake has just sent a text. “Cheesecake tomorrow is not cancelled,” he writes. “Are ...

Unfortunately or fortunately, I don't have much to say critic-wise. It's not a super ominous nor action-packed chapter, but we get to see another part of Willow and the rabbit-eating-bird ...

Can I just say how much I love Mr. Pyus? Because I do, and I just said it. Getting Bugged Down, Buggie It's apparent in this chapter that while your ...

Hello! I'm here to write a review... which should be kind of self-explanatory. Why did I put this intro paragraph here again? Cut 'em Up! This is one huge paragraph, ...

*Puts on unnecessary sunglasses* I'm here. Sort of Advice? The events and description start off slow and a bit stuffed, but it begins clearing up once Marie appears and disappears ...