EnderFlash

I came on and saw that you commented on my work three times xD Well, I'll keep those action tips in mind! I should start writing little segments to practice ...

Thanks for the review! I don't know about the first-person thing... I've tried it a couple times, but I always scrapped it because it didn't feel right.

About your Misc. 1... Lucius is poor, but you can't really call his home a bad neighborhood. I've never had a good grasp on this, though. I mean... we can ...

BLEH BLEH BLEHHHHHHH (Translates to 'I'm so sorryyyy') Thanks for the review! Yeah, everything is a little darker 'cuz the last novel I was writing was pretty much 100% humor ...

Ah, I will finish it. In fact, I'm working on it right now. I kindaaa stalled for LMS and then I ended up having to rush the deadline. Whoooopsss?? Anyways, ...

Yes, it actually meant not to review xD I'm currently finishing it. But thanks anyways, because now I can go ahead and fix some stuff now that you've pointed them ...

Cheesecake Factory ftw :D It doubles as a pretty dang good restaurant (the bread is amazing), so if we have time we can drive there for lunch and buy cheesecake ...

Thanks! Yeah, Mik's stutter seems to be a huge problem. I'm trying my best to cut it down as much as possible.

I am grinning so hard right now. I'm glad the description was good! lksjd fplskf szfj; iersipofzdlkedskl dfjdfkxfl;jwesifkd sdfxsdklfj ^ Sorry, but really, your review has made my day :D

... Yeah, the puree part is weird ;u; I'm going to go ahead and delete it.

Eheheh, no notes because I couldn't find any problems that I didn't mention before already. I'll make sure to tell you that next time.

Oh, it's just that as soon as you said Pansear, I thought "goofy monkey!" Heh, stereotypes =3= It would've been amusing to see the uptight Minerva be good friends with ...

I didn't feel like bringing it up in my own review, but you didn't get rid of the space, Astral. Shieldon's the Pokemon, not Shield on. nitpicksyayyyy?

Ah, thank you! I changed that; it was supposed to be "Mikhail didn't seem any shyer".

I'm late, but thank you for the review! I'm glad you like the chapter titles ^.^ I like to make weird ones.