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Re: Many Good Things Are Surprises
Hello everyone!! Just a quick something I wipped up. :) It was the last day if school and it happened as everyone said it would happen. The girls were sitting ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: The Camp-site Treehouse
It's just a quick something I came up with, so it won't be perfect. Enjoy anyway! :) Beth lay in the shade in the tree house, sheltered from the early ...
Oct 7, 2011 -
Re: Mirror of Erised
*Sorry it was repeated*
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Mirror of Erised
Wow, this is good! The pace is good. I like how you made us reader read between the lines to see that it is the Mirror of Erised instead of ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: My Deepest Desire
Hi! I like how descriptive your story is. Describing your school in the third paragraph was great! It made the setting feel more realistic and not just a place you ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: If only (contest entry)
Hi I'm Eniarrol! Thanks for entering my contest! Most of the spelling and grammar was corrected before I read this. Which is fine because I'm not too good on those ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Mirror Mirror... Am I fairest?
Hello I'm Eniarrol! Thanks for entering my contest. I love your take on the Mirror of Erised. Many people would take the Mirror of Erised as a magical, mysterious thing. ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Deep Down
Hello I'm Eniarrol. A big thank you for entering my contest!! For a while there a thought I wouldn't have enough people. I like how at the start you lowered ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: My Personal Reflection - The Mirror of Erised contest entry
Hi I'm Eniarrol. Thanks for entering my contest. Now, because I have literally no points I will be going around reviewing people pieces so that it is possible for me ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Never Your Fairytale
Hello I'm Eniarrol! Your reviewer today! I loved the imagery in this poem like: He’s her prince, With his disarming smile and pretty words. He holds her on the dance ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [8]
Sniks, why are you so beautiful? :) *is jealous of eyes*
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [8]
267450_228966497144165_100000924491190_661859_821226_n.jpg Oh my gosh! Look it's me :)
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Penguins!
Hi I'm SweetMoments and I'll be your reviewer today! Wow! I thought that was amazing! Especially from the random select theme you got given! I was just a little confused ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Sooooo these are me! 2011_0618Bethphotos0023.JPG 2011_0618Bethphotos0021.JPG
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Boneland
Yes there is virtually no ending but it's because I'm working on a different one than the one I had before! Boneland A teenage girl sauntered, slightly hunched, through a ...
Jun 15, 2011