Enigma

Christian. :wink:

Sweet berry marmalade, A batch made just for you. Papa's chopping firewood, And Mama's making stew. The sky light is dimming from hill-to-hill, A few bright stars scattered high. Splashes ...

Two lines; they tell so much. :wink: At first, I didn't get it, I guess because I was looking too hard and trying to dig too deep for some hidden ...

Going with what everyone was saying before, your chapter needs just a little work. :wink: I don't know much about your characters, other than Daniel and Antonio are gay. :lol: ...

These are all FANTASTIC shots, Areida. :D My favorite would have to be the one with the tiled steps. (I don't know what they are) That one's really pretty, and ...

Hey, there. I've read all the other chapters to your story, and I must say that you've really got something here. :D Your characters are original, as is the plot, ...