Eric511

hey people dont read this one, i made some adjustments and stuff read this one

Also i haven't quite finished this, but in this i want to create a cold, bitter and naggy sort of feeling at the beginning, but at the end to be ...

lol thanks people. From some of your reactions, I can tell I hit the spot. That makes me happy. I'm still workin on it so...I will correct the stuff and ...

lol i like ur enthusiasm. thnks for reading it

Alright thanks soo much you guys make it so much easier to edit this. Thanks again. : )

Thanks people. I will take all your advice into consideration as i make this story better.Thanks for reading it

Alright Thanks for giving me some help. thank you so much for all your guy's advice. I'll fix it up a bit and repost it in awhile. After rereading it ...

Sorry it's kinda long, didn't really think when I submitted it