User avatar

ErinYount

ErinYount

  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness

    Hi. Well, for starters, thanks for such a detailed review. Honestly, it did make me think of rewriting some sentences. I've been told before that I do have a tendency ...

    Dec 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness

    Would look forward to that.

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness

    Well.. Umm.. It's not just about sex. It's about how a moment of rape through manipulation comes to her when she is having sex for the first time after that. ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness

    Thanks!! For the rating, I'd just explain that since the story involves a nineteen year old, thinking of "three years ago", when she was 16, her first sex. I rated ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness

    Hi Nike. Thanks. That was a really touching review. And yes, that last one was just a typo. Thank you for taking the time to read this, and write such ...

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Left Hand of Consciousness

    Dec 5, 2013
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: But Love Hangs So Beautifully

    Frankly i love the piece. It is amazing, and breath-taking. It flows like melted butter, with substance and expression, something that absolutely stick-on. "Love is like a decoration, and I ...

    Dec 5, 2013


Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind