Eris

Hey TemptedFiction, welcome to YWS! I'm Eris, but you can call me whatever you want. =) There are a few rules/guidelines here that need to be followed, so I listed ...

Hi, Caged! Welcome to Young Writers Society! =) I do like it, but there are a few things that need to be fixed. When you love , can ' t ...

Hello, Texan! I love them all, especially the second picture. :) Picture One: I like it, but the edge of the house to the left takes away a little bit. ...

Hi Jayden, and welcome to Young Writers Society! =) I really like this poem, but the last two lines don't seem to match completely when it comes to syllables. I ...

Hello, Day! Woah, a Halloween Bonfire ? That's really awesome. XD The cat and butterfly are both pretty and neat, but I like the bonfire. =P How old is your ...

Hello, Ginger! This is a very interesting story, and I like it. =) Like Caitlyn said, I only really notice typos, punctuation, and capitalization errors. Pandora ran fast down the ...

Hi Sudz! This is an interesting piece and I do look forward to reading more of your writing, but I do think there's room for improvement. “Sandy!!!!! I did it! ...