Eros

Oh! That! I too have that same chapter!!! Its in Flamingo! That Danney Casey! Oh! Are you an Indian too?!

Thank you for the review Jessiebear!! :D I am glad you liked it. I will work on it a little more. Thanks again!

Thank you so muvh for the review, Wolfie!!! :D :D I am very very happy you liked it :D

No, no, no!! Birdie! you never sounded rude! It was all nice. We learn from our mistakes. And a fact, we all think we havent done mistake. And so, we ...

Sorry for the late reply :( Here, actully, this is what has happened with me in reality. I am trying to just write everything as it is, without mixing even ...

Thank you so much Wolfie!! I am glad you like it :D

Thak you for the review Fanta!! :D I am glad you like it.

Thank you for the review! :) I have removed thosse unnecessary puctuatons and ellipses. And regarding the description of Mohit, I have done it already in the last paragraph of ...

Thank you, xv0nilla Writerx!! I will work upon it according to your guidelines :D. I should try to describe everything in full possible depth to make it more interesting.

Hello Lava! Thanks for the review! So, I see... I should work upon it and try to make it more attractive. You have said that: "Instead of saying "he's tall ...

Thank You, Steggy for writing the review. Hmm... So , I should make it more wet by describing, rather than simply stating. Steggy, I want more of your valuable guidelines ...

Hmm... That would be really great! Theses topics really need to come up... You can do it very nicely Best luck! :D

A VERY BIG Good luck to you from Eros! You will do extremely well in your field one day... And that "one day" is coming very soon. I wish for ...

Awww!!!! Criminology!!!!!!!! Thats very awesome!!!! Do you finger prints also?!! I love that! Thats so so so so good!

Woow! That's Great! Which field are you going?