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EternityRain

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Locket

    The Locket ~ A great peice, very straight forward and very well written. All in all it is a very good write and I enjoyed it. :D

    Feb 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Please, please just give your opinion - even if brief.

    Hi, wow, this is very good!~ I loved it! Keep writing! :D

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Code of the mistake

    Hi Snoik, I am going to cheat here and let you in on a few secrets. Later on in the book Karma finds out that her brother had tracked their ...

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Where did you go...?

    Thanks everyone for your comments and advise I will take them all into heart and will be fixing typos soon as possible.

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Deathless

    Your poem is very deep and emotional, and very well written. Watch your caps though. I enjoyed your work and look forward to reading more of it in the future.

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Too Many Secrets

    Wow, I liked it! Awesome!

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Code of the mistake

    Niapitts: "Karma knows where her father lives because her brother left her his address. I goofed and forgot to write that down lol. Lol, thanks, I'm glad you liked Karma's ...

    Feb 5, 2011


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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