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Re: Average, chapter 6 (rough draft)
Ohh, so is this set in the future, in 2022?
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 5 (rough draft)
I can't wait to read the next chapter, then!
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)
Beginnings: Endings: How to End a Story
Jan 25, 2018 -
Re: Average, chapter 4 (rough draft)
Feel free to let me know when you post the next chapter! Because I'm really looking forward to the interesting middle. :D If you want tips on how to write ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 3 (part two) of 'Jadeland'
Yes, definitely add more description! If you want, I can highlight areas next chapter where I think more detail would be apt.
Jul 5, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 2 of 'Jadeland'
Yes!
Jul 4, 2017 -
Re: Within my blood (Chapter1)
No problem!
Jul 3, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 1 of 'Jadeland'
Nah, that wasn't the nitpicky thing, haha. I tend to leave names alone except if the author isn't consistent in the spelling within the work itself. "Good job Mattew!" Missing ...
Jul 2, 2017 -
Re: Mercury, Chapter 1
Thank you for the input! We will definitely take this into account.
Jun 10, 2017 -
Re: Mercury, Chapter 1
Thank you so much!
Jun 9, 2017 -
Re: fin.
Thank you so much!
Apr 23, 2017 -
Re: quartz (and that's only what you were told)
Thank you so much for the review! I will definitely try to keep some of the suggestions into account when I edit this! "aerosolized"? I couldn't think of another word ...
Apr 22, 2017 -
Re: quartz (and that's only what you were told)
Thank you for the review!
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: quartz (and that's only what you were told)
Don't be afraid of making assumptions! Poetry is very much an experience for the reader as it is for the writer, so I would love to know what you thought ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: cardboard castles
Hmm, yeah, I've run into a bit of a problem lately with using nonspecific pronouns. I think that's mostly because most of my recent poems are based off of events ...
Apr 21, 2017