Evi

I say the blue one, for clarity's sake. ^_^ But, would the letters be in white, like you have in this picture, or black, like they are right now in ...

All-caps in the title?! Gosh, Nate, we'll have to ban you for that. :P But we can certainly handle one week, especially since chat will be open! ^_^ I'm sure ...

Yep! I understand exactly what you mean; that question confuses me a lot, too. :wink: But I've got to agree with Rosey. While it's true that the narrator with always ...

Hey Abigail! I'll just make some quick suggestions, for such a short piece. ^_^ First of all, this was extremely well written! I'd like to congratulate you on that before ...

“Once upon a time, there was a beautiful princess named Katie.” I groaned at the sound of the little girl’s voice, high and clear over the rush of takeoff. She ...

Hey Alec. ^_^ I'm just going to make some general suggestions and point out a couple of typos. “Just a few more minutes, mom,” sounded Marcus’s response, muffled trough the ...

Camp's over! =D So, my thread can now resurrect from the depths of this forum and proceed to better the literary world with constructive criticism and insightful input! In other ...

Hey Young gun, Evi here. I saw that this poem was ever so tragically shoved from the first page with only one review, and I decided that I must remedy ...

Hey AquaMarine! ^_^ Evi here. That's a great idea, making a movie with a poem screening over it! And we all love sunny days, so even better! :P This is ...

This time we're going to be focusing on character development and the effects of the global recession. Seriously? Because I don't believe you. xD Really, I don't. But it shall ...

Hey Kinera! Welcome to YWS. ^^ Alright, so. I was actually very impressed. I can't exactly put a finger on your meaning, but you've got some great images in here ...

Hello Twigg, Evi here today. ^^ Rain pelted the ground outside; bolts of lightening light the sky like a giant torch was being flashed on and off. Mr Rodaway was ...

No way. O_o You're, like, real people!? I always envisioned this all-knowing god-like entities. And chimps. :P But everyone is beautiful! ^_^ YWS has pervaded the internet with gorgeous people.

Hey meggy! ^^ Evi here. So, I agree with the previous reviewer-- you're main (and basically, your only) problem is that this is a bit too much backgroudn info and ...

Hey Luvzi! ^_^ I saw this nice, short little poem, and since that's about all I have focus for at the moment, I thought I'd review it! :D Alright, first ...