ExOmelas

Hm... I was kind of hoping him taking the decision to go to the nightclub would be active, but I will look out for this in future! Thanks for the ...

Oh dammit that's the formatting. On the document I wrote it there's a double line before he starts talking to his mother. Ron's his coach, which I definitely mentioned in ...

No problem :)

Ah, ok. I look forward to seeing where the different threads of story go. Also, thanks for liking my review - that reminded me I keep forgetting to like these ...

You're welcome :)

Cool, will put on my list :)

Np :)

I'm actually not sure. If I were to try and disagree, I'd have to say "this can't work because of X thing that is not true about God" and I ...

oh, ps. I have no idea what the title means xD

Thanks for the review! I've edited it since the confusion so that's a good sign xD

No problem guys, happy to help :D

No problem :)

Also I'll have the next chapter of The Progeny reviewed before the next chapter of this goes up.

Oops, guess that must have got lost in edits. The idea is that you're not meant to know what it is and it's testing your ability to follow the instructions ...

Np :)