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The dog was biting the narrator, Lisa. And the sentence that you think doesn't make sense is just written in Scots dialect. Thank you for your review :-)

Ah thank you :-)

You're welcome! :)

Right so you should probably mention that

Thanks Truant. The problem is that the contest it's for has a 1000 word limit and this is literally 1000 words. I'll see what I can do within that :)

Oh right. We (the Scots) get out near the end of June and we go back in seven days and I got my exam results in yesterday.

Wow I don't go back for another week. You must have stopped for the holidays really early too, right? otherwise you're just getting a really short holiday. I mean, the ...

Haha! Well, I'll just have to point them out :) also, are you back at school already?

Thanks Masq! I'll speak to Mess and we'll see if we can tidy it up a bit so it's a little smoother. :)

Thank you very much for review. I'll talk to Messenger whenever he gets back from wherever he is :-)

Thank you! :D

Thank you very much :) It's not that I prefer London; it's more the idea that because Scotland is part of Britain I can belong to parts of Britain outwith ...

You're welcome :)

Thank you so much. I will see what I can do :) *plays bagpipes*

Haha :)