Explosive_Pen

Well, writing is a blood-sport. The thing about poetry is that it's not what you say, it's how you say it. Take for example: "There were stars in the sky." ...

Chapter 5 “See, there’s the big dipper, and there’s the little dipper.” “Are those the only two constellations you know?” “Yes.” I turned onto my side and looked at Will, ...

Thanks for the welcome, Samuel Garrison. Maybe I will do that tutorial thing, but I don't think poetry's really something you can learn. You just build upon it. Sometimes I ...

Genius! I absolutely love the alliteration. It seems effortless. Darn you for making it look easy! Anywayzerz, now for the real critiqueing. Poisoned (prisoned) peace-deathless decoration! I don't und

Brilliant poem, and the whole punctuation bit has been pointed out already, so I don't have to waste everyone's time with all that technical junk. I loved the raw emotion ...

Another one of my experiments, gone awry. Lemme know what you think. I dunno how you format on here, so disregard the bad layout. Anywayz, enjoy (or, you know, don't)! ...

Nate ~ Thank you! This was just a little experiment of mine; no planning whatsoever. I need to get out of that habit. Anyway, yeah, I'm told imagery is my ...

Pfft. 'Tisn't talent, 'tis just the words swimming around in my head. They align themselves; my job is to simply put them on paper. Thsnk you for your praise and ...

Alrighty. I haven't checked back here in a while, so I'll get to work answering the questions. The username comes from my obsession with explosions, as well as my obsession ...

No one saw it; The shadow in the corner, Thrown back by light, But not by an object. A single shadow, A deformed black heart. Why is it there? No ...

Wow... This is so angry. Weed is bad, not to mention illegal. What I liked about this was that it played out like a story. You have the beginning, middle, ...

Alright, let's see what can be said about this, shall we? T he emotion's not shown , and the voice not in the right tone because deep in my mind ...

Honestly? No one's gonna comment on this?

Genius. Totally genius. I love how you mutilated Bella; I always hated her. And the plot is SO better than Twilight's. :roll: You guys are brilliant. Thanks for making me ...

They haunt me. They chant in my head, over and over again, like the eerie hiss of a spell being cast. Their voices reach out like thick, lost fog, sweeping ...