Explosive_Pen

Aww... So sad. I've always been pro-life, so this really made me cry. This is so beautifully written. There's so much raw emotion, and you really feel like you're the ...

TWIN!!!!! This is so sad... You've been lieing to me! No, but seriously, I know exactly how you feel. Alright, so nit-pickles: Alone in the room, The should be this. ...

Um, first of all: chatspeak alert! Oh noez! That's one of the most annoying things ever, particularly because I can't understand one word of it. I know, I'm such a ...

Hey! Okay, so I absolutely loved this poem. There's a lot that could have been fixed, punctuation-wise, but I'm feeling lazy today so I won't go in and put all ...

Bonjour. I love the slant rhyme in the first stanza. It's absolutely genius, and unlike with most slant rhymes, my mind doesn't stutter when I read it. In the last ...

Hiya. I'm a nitpick this, 'kay? There is a Magic to nature that will never be explained by science. ^Like Twin (aka Fluteluvr77) said before me, magic should not be ...

Aww, Twin. So sad. Yes, I know he is a horrible person. But don't feel bad. We all make mistakes (like me!). Rhythm issues. Like, lots of them. And the ...

Wow, Twin, awesome! Didn't see any grammar mistakes so that's good. It seems really short though. A lot shorter than when we hand-wrote it. But that's probably because I write ...

Oh, June, this is beautiful. I mean, it's extremely sad and it makes want to go crawl under a rock, but it's beautifully written. Absolutely amazing, and I am so ...

Emily!!! Gahk, you know Twin doesn't punctuate (which is why she should've let me type it; tsk). And yeah, I told her not to put thoughts in quotes. And by ...

In the tenth line, put "it's" before too. (El) I love the seventeenth line with the "grinning", nice personification there (May) Yes, we gave you a joint review. Feel special. ...

This is wonderful. Like, amazing. I absolutely love your writing. It really resonates with me emotionally. Anyway, there's nothing here that I can critique except for in the last line. ...

Haha. This is hilarious. Totally made my day and made me smile. I absolutely love this. I adore the transitions from happy to angry and whatnot. Anyway, I can't find ...

Just a quick note: I realize this poem lacks description, but description was never my strong point. My current style as a poet is to simply say what I need ...

This was beautiful. I think we all know and have experienced the pain that comes along with writing. This was very well-written and the rhyme scheme's creative. Except in the ...