Extraterrestial

Hey thanks alot for reviewing, and i can actually see now that some off the stuff dosn't make sense. Oh and ill remmebr not just to do spell check. So ...

This was a good read, but i thoguth the description could have been way betetr, especially for describing the preavers. And it hgouht it was a little too rushed fro ...

This was exenlent and fun too read but with a few errors but they're miner so i'll leave them out so keep writting. I havn't read the other chapters, but ...

I thought it was a good piece and a good read, but i was little lost and confused but apart from that i coldn't spot any errors so keep up ...

Thanks, but i recently edited it os it's only a short story, and in that editing a picked up on most of my grammar mistakes, but thanks for reviewing anyway.

Hey i thought this was great and very entertaining. Also the dialog was cool. but i didn't understand it, which was real shame as i haven't read the other parts ...

This is a great idea and i dont agree with the others about it being overdone. i think werewolves in rome is a very cool and unique idea so thumbs ...

I also thought the description you used was fab, and the plot was gripping. lol that's all i have got to say really so thumbs up. i want to hear ...

when u said she was writting from the dead. shes not. She said to her husband to tell the boys what she is saying now.

i'm i boy of few words Brilliant

goog. brilliant

Same as aedomir alli could see was 'i' post ot agian and i might actually read it.