FLyerS

I wish you could find something better to talk about than love. Love found. Love lost. Love taken. Love given. Love forbidden. Love ignored. I am tired of "love" as ...

Good topic. You need to work on the rhythm and meter.

Good poem. I like it when people don't use love as a crutch. Good job on the topic. In my opinion, you should change little words here: "One thing’s for ...

very ok. You started out with a tired old theme, then you changed it to something slightly less tired. Overall, I liked your wording, but you need to pick a ...

lol is a word I like. I use it to say that you are so Funny

Awwwwww! So CUTE!

I love your imagery here. SO COOL. Especially the French at the end. I love French.

I likes it i likes it. Very good. Love the last line :smt089 so true.

I think you are over reacting. I am a female, so I can safely say, that if you buy pants that have no pockets and you want pockets, you are ...

Ok, I don't want this to be a popularity vote. If someone has been especially nice to you, this can be, like, a public shout-out. If someone inspires hero-worship, worship ...

Very good!

NASTY NITPICKS are always first. So, here goes. I love to love the things I hate But to hate the things I love, Would be a lie to my heart ...

First of, THE NASTY NITPICKINGS :twisted: those with weak constitutions should leave the arena. Every time I try and pictures your faces? Picture not pictures. Stil don’t; Two 'l's count ...

Very good. I liked the second stanza. Your bright blue eyes, now a crimson red. Your innocent face, now a murderous stare. Your wondrous joys, now deceitful lies. Oh! So ...

Very well written. I cannot find any flaws with this piece. The lines didn't trip over themselves, the rhythm was appealing, and you just made sense! My favorite part: catching ...