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Re: Outer Space
re-did it. also, maybe we could make videos together :)
Jul 13, 2014 -
Re: Outer Space
Hey, sorry for late reply, but thanks for reviewing! I added what you said, thanks a bunch!
Jul 13, 2014 -
Re: You Have Storm Clouds in You
Ah, I forget about that! Sorry! Anyways, good job!
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 9
ABSOLUTELY FABULOUS. I have nothing to criticize about it! I LOVE how you really used details in dialogue and in the story in general. I really feel like you have ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Outer Space
aww thanks
May 25, 2014 -
Re: True Alchemist: Chapter 1
Your story seems to have really great potential. i'd add more details, and I think everything happens like bam,bam,bam. Take your time. let us get into the story, smoothly and ...
Apr 22, 2014