Faithhope

Thanks for the great review! Also, this was actually an assignment I did to write something based on a picture. :)

Thanks for the positive feedback! :D

Thank you! :)

I really like the theme of this piece! The first few sentences are my favorite. The imagery is great! I think this works well as a short piece. However, the ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you! I really appreciate the grammar advice. Punctuation is not my strong point. Regarding the last line: it was meant to be an addition to "Maybe I wanted to ...

Thank you for the advice and praise, stripeslife! As for the "millionaire" line, I'll admit I was a bit confused myself after writing it. I suppose the point I was ...

Lovely work! Nicely written and enjoyable to read. Gave me lots of images and feelings. I like your heartfelt style. Keep it up! :)

Great poem! Very well written! I love the wittiness! I can relate, haha. I drink coffee to get me going, but then I can't sleep at night, so I'm tired ...

I really like your use of imagery!

I really like your use of imagery!