Fall_Into_The_Sky

Very interesting. Waiting for more!

I really like this. It shows so much imagry.

Haha i day dream about stories too :) Can't wait for more.

When's the next part come :) This is very interesting story. Yea, I know what you mean about being in a hurry.

This is really good Me and my friend are working on a story about fox demons ( but we call them ferals).

Ha! There's nothing wrong whith having a shy boyfriend. Mine is. The voices in her head cracked me up. And her friend even agrees. Very interesting perspective. Can't wait for ...

I liked how it jumps from one perspectibe to another. Ha! I could just picture Tom being rejected and storming out. He better watch out for that one ^ .

Have I mentioned how much I love this story? That cracked me up the way he grabbed her around her waist untill finally she was sick of it.

I put all my stuff up and we left This should be I picked all my stuff up and we left. He carried my books and we talked forever when ...

Great story keep it up

I have to write an essay about critical reading. They want me to describe it and make a critical reading plan. I don't get critical reading at all :shock: Help

I think this is a very good beginning to a story. And ahem feathers do flash in the sunlight. If a bird's feathers are healthy and full of sheen the ...

I like this. It's an odd story, but very good.

Very beautiful. Have you written poetry long?

I love this story. It shows the hardships of war, but also how people are all the same. Man I wish we didn't have wars...