Fall_Into_The_Sky

This was VERRY well written. And a very interesting story.

I really enjoyed this. Favorite part is when she rips the guy's head off.

I like it very much. It just needs to be spaced out more, and grammar etc...

I very much enjoyed this. Her parents really should but out of her love life.

Very interesting. Waiting for more!

I really like this. It shows so much imagry.

Haha i day dream about stories too :) Can't wait for more.

When's the next part come :) This is very interesting story. Yea, I know what you mean about being in a hurry.

This is really good Me and my friend are working on a story about fox demons ( but we call them ferals).

Ha! There's nothing wrong whith having a shy boyfriend. Mine is. The voices in her head cracked me up. And her friend even agrees. Very interesting perspective. Can't wait for ...

I liked how it jumps from one perspectibe to another. Ha! I could just picture Tom being rejected and storming out. He better watch out for that one ^ .

Have I mentioned how much I love this story? That cracked me up the way he grabbed her around her waist untill finally she was sick of it.

Great story keep it up

I like this. It's an odd story, but very good.

Very beautiful. Have you written poetry long?