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I think Paolini needs to take a course in medieval warfare. Here are the reasons: 1.Silver and gold does NOT make good armour in any case (Unless of course, it's ...

*Neve edges next to Kasper* "Would you like to dance Kasper? ~ Neve "Seth, I think Neve wants to dance" ~ Kasper *Walks away. Seth almost chokes on cake.*

Sorry, but I'm going to have to be a bit harsh here. The story was a bit of a drag to read due to the poor paragraphing. Put spaces in ...

Hello! Michael seated herself and drew a boot dagger, idly cleaning under her nails with the tip. I think it would sound better if you said 'Michael seated herself, drew ...

Chapter 1 – By the stream The wolf prowled through the forest. It was the size of a large horse with wild grey fur and deadly-looking fangs. It raised its ...

When I read this it does spring to mind how easily Kearia just seems to go along with what Icthus says. Surely you wouldn't be that trusting of a stranger ...

I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by ...

Fried ~ Seth Is this a trick question? ~ Neve None of your business.~ Kasper I am sorry but Elayna does not feel like answering silly questions at the moment.

7/10 It's calming for some reason

The YWS mob. :?

:shock: ................................................... Just finished Eldest. I'll leave it at that.

Kasper and Seth are foils. Seth is curious and lacks common sense whereas Kasper doesn't delve into anyhting more than he needs to and annoys Seth a lot with his ...

Wow, I was in a hurry and planning to just scan stuff but when I delved furthur in and found your story, I had to read it all! And now ...

Human anatomy. Do you carpe diem?

In my opinion, I think it gives a bad impression of young writers to the people who count.