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  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Two Golden Arches

    "Literally, the place was called No Where City!" probably shouldn't have an exclamation point unless someone is yelling it. "I watched me curiously." I think this should be it (Unless ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Science Fiction Re: Voices

    I really liked your story. I think that you need to use more sensory details. I want to know what this place looks like! I was also confused during the ...

    Nov 25, 2014


Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)