FantasyWriter25

A very interesting poem. I like how it expresses deep feelings about someone dying. I also am intriguied by the thought of someone dying loving you, and someone living hating ...

Very well written! I quite enjoyed reading this poem, you expressed your feelings in a very deep and emotional way. I also liked the way you used bold-print. That made ...

This was a brilliant piece of work! I loved all the descriptions you put into it, and the part about the bet for the golden watch and lighting the sky ...