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Hmm... Ready? The review : Books, vases…everything was being thrown around the room. I was on my way through that room when a book came hurling at me. You`re lacking ...

I think you didn't notice that I am not reviewing poetry, but anyway you asked for a review here it is. As much as I can do. And...dust... As ...night, ...

The worst book(s) ever read by me - Narnia series. I finished all 7 off them in 2 days -.-` and i had hard time following the action and the ...

First of all it's an amazing piece of work. Second... the review: -Nothing much to say as the chapter is small and stuffed with descriptions of the character, but i ...

Nice idea. I liked reading it... now the review. The sky today was properly grey and somber, not that it was at all unusual. It gave the entire churchyard a ...

Nice idea. You got talent to write but you need to get yourself more into the action. The descriptions as well - you need to work at your style of ...

Amazingly done. This would be a great story written in prose. Maybe you should consider wrapping it in a story. It can become very powerful. I read your first part ...

Ok. The review : 1.) At first glare i saw that you use a lot the word "said" - try giving tips about who`s next in the dialogue - example: ...

Kinda reminds me of another battle cry from Tales of the Past 3 : "When shadow comes to claim our souls Some must rise - the light of old Names ...

It was a dark night, one of the darkest of them all. We moved through the night as silently as we could. Thats all you can say about a night? ...

Well you asked for a review this what i found. He felt a gust of wind touching his body making him shiver a little. He blinked, looked down and to ...

The idea is great. Needs so processing tho` : If hw ould have had the will If he would have had the will, Nit to kill the man who was ...

Ok you need a review i`ll do my best. I looked up into the sky hoping for... something... anything. It was dark and cold, too cold. A small bur started ...

Poor guy... His world is upside down -.-` Mike turned his head from the troll to the pixie. “Oh! How rude of me. Jack this is, Nel. Nel this is, ...

*giggle* Funny. Made me smile... Again a little problem with the descriptions - I don't have a picture of that gnome made in my head. The dialogue- again the problem ...