FinalFreedom

Okay, so the school of fish in this world emit wails of terror, and apparently Brahn had intentions of protecting the fish, but promptly left the issue alone once Aneris ...

[pre]As you can tell by the subject, this is yet unnamed. Any titles you all think of that would suit this so far would be greatly appreciated! Chapter 1 Brahn ...

Overall good plot. Though, I do have some of constructive criticism for you. First of all, I agree with abhove poster. Instead of making your "parts" long with small amounts, ...