FireGirl

Poem, a mear word, a fragmentation, Of the wonderful feeling, the sensation, Of writing thoughts, to share with others, To give to fathers, to give to mothers. Poem, a strong ...

Wow! I really like your drawings, Bobo! I better go work on my drawing skills...

Thisis really good. I like your choice of words and the imagery...

Haha! Very funny, I really like it. Good work..

Yes, I agree with Dream...this poem/bunch of words needs a lot of editing...

This is a wonderful poem, and I think many writers can relate to this. Most of us are teased or are bullied just because we can WRITE. Writers are the ...

Thank you..

This poem is aimed at younger children, and may also be a song...any comments? I wish of wishes, of wishes themselves. Of horses and turtles, lions and elves. Of trees ...

Haha... Sometimes you have to jump up and down to get people's attention! I really like it. This is a great poem! I really like the words you chose, and ...

Yeah, Boulevard Of Broken dreams gets on my nerves... I haven't heard "Here I Go Again" before, or even the band/singer Whitesnake before. Also, who says Whitesnake didn't get his/hers/its ...

Really nice, I like it a lot. I like the fast pace... I think Bobo's title is pretty good. Another one could be 'Fair Weather'.

I really like it! Good choice of words...great write.

lie irreversibly as distant fallen fences against white winter, as though the angle of repose is the imperative lesson, there has never I love that line... Wow...this poem is great...just ...

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Thanks you guys! By the way, Bobo, are you a member of a forum called The Young Writers' Guild? I remember there was someone there named Bobo, with the same ...